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Forgetting all those silent memories
That haunt the soul and mind
That corrupt the happy thoughts
Which are usually so hard to find

Trying to keep them silent
Hoping they'll get lost
But sometimes their stronger
And happiness is all it costs

For memories you don't want
Such sacrifice you pay
To not feel that painful memory
You just want to go away

It seeps into your life unannounced
Like some kind of disease
As it eats away the happiness
That once used to ease

all the pain you have suffered
And the darkness that you see
all the loss of your happiness
is all caused by those silent memories
©2006-2009 ~666holly
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umm well these are memories and feeling shining through i guess you could say,
i think i did pretty good on this one but i'm not sure yet.
comments encouraged hope you like

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:iconangeloftheshadows:
very deep and i can understand where that may have stemmed from :hug: hope ya feel happier soon

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thanks damo but somtimes i feel like i'm never going to feel happier

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Hm, it's rough, but I like it. You're trying a rhyme scheme, that's good, but the way you have your lines set up make it sort of hard to get a beat or a flow to it. Maybe try to have a specific amount of syllables per line. Unless this is really the kind of poem you're trying for. Either way, I still like it.

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:icon666holly:
thanx, i'm not really going for any perticual kind of poem i just kinda write without thinking, but i'm glad that you liked it and that you kinda understand it.

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omg, this is awesome, darling ...

it's very deep and has so much emotion in it. I find it easy to write about memories because there is so much you can do with the idea. you did a great job

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thx darling, yea memories for me cause i have so many and i'm happy that you liked it!!
and yes lots of emotion i was crying while i was writing it

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Very emotional piece. I liked it tons so im gong to fav it.
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:hug: thank you!!
and yes it was emotinial i was crying when i wrote it.

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BAM! a fav! :o

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memories, i hope something good comes your way holly, :hug: another fav on this well written :)

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